I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Kalivati. You have done a great job writing in full sentences and they all make sense. You have also made sure they are grammatically correct too! I agree that T showed integrity. Thank you for showing me the similarirites and differences between these two men. Next time, try and achieve the challenge I set. Can you think of 5 similarities?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Kalivati.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job writing in full sentences and they all make sense. You have also made sure they are grammatically correct too!
I agree that T showed integrity.
Thank you for showing me the similarirites and differences between these two men. Next time, try and achieve the challenge I set. Can you think of 5 similarities?